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Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 30 |
SunshineForest - #31
And we're approaching resolution at this point. I'm kind of a fanboy of Morton so even though Bushie is having a brilliant time, I am invariably drawn to him. Anyways, I think this page accomplishes what it was supposed to. The others are getting curious of Bushie fraternizing with the Big Bad Drago.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 31 |
SunshineForest - #32
Anyways folks, thanks for taking a looksee at this book. It was a spontaneous idea that I had to get down on paper before it left me. So I had a lot of it ready before I began any work. I love a lot of media like this so it reflects on a number of sources. In the end, it's not quite so dark at all. I know the subject matter is meant for kids, but I hope you've enjoyed our little romp.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 4 |
SunshineForest - #05
The Ramblin' Mushroom here does not factor into the story, so he has not been brought to full attention. This technique also lets me populate the Forest with other creatures without stuffing them down someone's throat. It shows that other stories are unfolding all around this one, and a kid can extrapolate the stories themselves. I think this benefits a story that otherwise directs you from beginning to end.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 5 |
SunshineForest - #06
Uh oh, what's all this then? There are a few hooks like this that will have later consequences. Though there is an overarching plot there are a few lessons along the way.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 6 |
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt.
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7/16/09 |
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