Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 6 |
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 7 |
SunshineForest - #08
Here's that focal mechanism again. The sun is important to this story, it often sets an unstated mood. But look in the background, a kid will make the connection between it being there now, and somewhere else on a later page. It marks that arrow lizard as something Bushie will interact with.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 8 |
SunshineForest - #09
I've waited until this page to talk about environment malleability. The art style allows me to bend the world to the story's emotional whim. It is subtle, but it gives me that freedom.
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7/16/09 |
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| Elobo |
Sunshine In the Forest Page 9 |
SunshineForest - #10
Here's the payoff from Page 7.
|
7/16/09 |
0.00 |
| Elobo |
SurfBound: Wish You *whir* Here! |
Hey Deluxe! Or as the kids down here would say, "Dude!" I hope this postcard finds you well! We really miss you down here, but I hear you've been promoted to the Stonehenge position! Congrats, that's "mondo gnarly!" The company vacation is going "way past tubular man!" The sea is so lovely and clean! Juana's here too! She has finally been taken off the Mountain assignment, so we're thinking seriously about out future now! Can't wait to talk to you, "bro," your good pal forever, -Ghost Of.
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7/18/09 |
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