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Other Submissions by Elobo
Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 8 |
SunshineForest - #09
I've waited until this page to talk about environment malleability. The art style allows me to bend the world to the story's emotional whim. It is subtle, but it gives me that freedom. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 7 |
SunshineForest - #08
Here's that focal mechanism again. The sun is important to this story, it often sets an unstated mood. But look in the background, a kid will make the connection between it being there now, and somewhere else on a later page. It marks that arrow lizard as something Bushie will interact with. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 6 |
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 5 |
SunshineForest - #06
Uh oh, what's all this then? There are a few hooks like this that will have later consequences. Though there is an overarching plot there are a few lessons along the way. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 4 |
SunshineForest - #05
The Ramblin' Mushroom here does not factor into the story, so he has not been brought to full attention. This technique also lets me populate the Forest with other creatures without stuffing them down someone's throat. It shows that other stories are unfolding all around this one, and a kid can extrapolate the stories themselves. I think this benefits a story that otherwise directs you from beginning to end. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
