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Other Submissions by Elobo
Author   |
Title |
Description |
Date |
Rank |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 5 |
SunshineForest - #06
Uh oh, what's all this then? There are a few hooks like this that will have later consequences. Though there is an overarching plot there are a few lessons along the way. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 6 |
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 7 |
SunshineForest - #08
Here's that focal mechanism again. The sun is important to this story, it often sets an unstated mood. But look in the background, a kid will make the connection between it being there now, and somewhere else on a later page. It marks that arrow lizard as something Bushie will interact with. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 8 |
SunshineForest - #09
I've waited until this page to talk about environment malleability. The art style allows me to bend the world to the story's emotional whim. It is subtle, but it gives me that freedom. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
| Elobo | Sunshine In the Forest Page 9 |
SunshineForest - #10
Here's the payoff from Page 7. |
7/16/09 | 0.00 |
